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New Journey!!

26 Jul

Share a thought of love with me,

Dream a life together with me,

keep the twinkle in your eyes which made me mad:)

keep away those tears which made me sad,

I always wish to miss myself in you..

Whether you know it or not its you,

about whom i think whenever i am alone!!

Be with me at the shores of loneliness,

Show me the new definition for happiness

Hold my hand during this new journey of life,

Its new,Different from school/college/work journey,

All those seminary and funny days which i enjoyed..

 
I want you to feel rich,hmmm.. figuring out all the moments

Which i could give you , and with money you can’t buy.

Hurt me…Tease me…Make me cry..

But at the end give me a shoulder on which i could lean..

May oneday come in later part of life,when we lose our age,strength

but not the intimacy!!

Thanks to them who is the reason behind all these to happen..

Ofcourse to our parents,Who sacrificed their happiness

Just to brought up us right from the day we born..

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8 Comments

Posted by on July 26, 2009 in Mine, poetry

 

8 responses to “New Journey!!

  1. Dinesh

    August 8, 2009 at 3:49 AM

    hmmmm asathura? soooper…

    Check grammer in few points…

     
  2. Suganya S

    August 18, 2009 at 12:08 PM

    chanceless love de 🙂

     
  3. Shanmugapriya

    August 19, 2009 at 9:34 AM

    will take care hareafter anna:)

    Thanks sugan;)

     
  4. smartgals

    August 23, 2009 at 10:48 AM

    ithana naal pazhagi irukkom…oru single line aavathu engala pathi eluthi irukkiya… ellaam over de…

    Anyways Good poem..
    “Naan Chinna ponnu de..Enakku onnum theriyaathu”nu ellaam dialogue pesina aalu thaane nee….Ok deee ippo thaaan athukaanaa artham muzhusaa engalaukku theriyuthu…

    Byeee…

     
  5. Shanmugapriya

    August 26, 2009 at 2:13 AM

    Enna charanya ipdi solita!!oru line a pakam pakama eluthi iruken de ungala pathium!!will show you soon:)you can also see them in this blog itself:)

     
  6. krithikasubramanian

    October 1, 2009 at 10:28 AM

    hey shanmu…. keep writing.. when is the next poem coming ?

     
  7. Agnes

    November 10, 2009 at 5:05 AM

    Good one da…..keep doing such creatives…Agnes

     
    • Shanmugapriya

      November 10, 2009 at 2:45 PM

      Thank you so much!!Its a pleasant surprise to receive a comment from you!!But how you got this link?

       

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